http://entropyrose.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] entropyrose.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dragonspell 2010-01-08 04:56 am (UTC)

"because even with them on he still feels naked." A very abrupt end to a very abrupt, to-the-point uhm... "session"... I like how this ending is really uncomfortable even for the reader--you feel like there should be more, much like the protagonist must feel.

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